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Post #1254558

Author
Dat_SW_Guy
Parent topic
STAR WARS: Last Jedi (The Anti-Cringe-Cut) (Released)
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Date created
7-Nov-2018, 7:36 AM

I’ve seen the clips over there at the Fanedit Forums and I wanted to say how amazing this project is.

One suggestion though, I think change you did to not have Luke throwing the saber is a bit clunky.

I suggest to use the moving shot of Luke holding the lightsaber, and the reaction shot from Rey, and cutting it off from there to the wide shot of the village.

You can use a different soundtrack to help lead in the way to that wide shot.