The battle starts too suddenly. Let the scene linger in silence everyone behind the shields for a moment.
^I disagree , I think the very few seconds of the door unlocking at the beginning you did is very good
Post #1252136
- Author
- screams in the void
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- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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- Date created
- 25-Oct-2018, 11:10 AM