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Post #1245567

Author
Funcha
Parent topic
The Jedi's Apprentice - My AOTC Fan edit - trailer on youtube
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Date created
3-Oct-2018, 12:58 PM

I’m not sure how you plan to address it, but I always thought the initial kiss scene seemed awkwardly placed. After a huge amount of sexual tension is clearly established, the next scene is them together laughing and frolicking around happily like the previous scene never happened. If I had just been quasi-rejected by the love of my life, I’m not sure I would be quite so cheerful hanging out any longer. Ha! The tonal shift seems a bit jarring to me.