if you take out the “she lost the will to live” line of dialogue, her death becomes pretty believable. i mean, it’s not unusual at all for mothers to die on childbirth. especially if you were strangled a couple of moments before and were under a lot of stress for the past couple of months.
Post #1243129
- Author
- Collipso
- Parent topic
- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1243129/action/topic#1243129
- Date created
- 25-Sep-2018, 9:21 PM