The revisions are finished. One notable change is yet another alteration to the nature of the S-shield; instead of being any type of family crest, I now perceive it as either a symbol representing Krypton, a Raoist religious symbol, or both.

I should be getting started on a new entry soon. Luthor’ll likely make his appearance next. I’ve also figured out a way to include Brainiac in the story after all. That’s a good thing, 'cause the ending I have in mind would be difficult to execute if he isn’t involved.