I do like that better, the pacing is better.
Here is a question for eveyone as well … should there be some kind of music in the background instead of the silence? Kind of gloom and doom subtle music? In some ways too it almost seems anti climatic since it’s so quiet … unless that just me!
That’s a great question. I sort of felt that the climax was Finn getting shot down. And the next couple of shots benefitted from a sparser mix, letting the firing and explosion own the stage. At the same time, I can see how it may still be too long without music, and makes the explosion anti-climactic, So I’ve put together something that has a little more rumbling build-up to the explosion. It doesn’t take away from the Finn moment, but serves as an extension (I think) of the climax, building to the inevitable.
Here it is:
https://vimeo.com/289775362 (PW: fanedit)
The clip is the same length, so I would start at 1:10 to see the new part.