Alrighty, so I made some adjustment to V2 per NeverarGreat’s feedback. I added an extra shot of the base between Rose getting shot and Finn’s reaction. You still hear Finn yelling “Rose” over the comms. I also made an attempt to add the blast of the door, cutting from the impact to Kylo’s face (RogueLeader’s suggestion). See link below.

I want to organize the links on the Crait Battle. We currently have 3 versions:

Version 1
Version 2A
Version 2B
(Password for all: fanedit)

Version 1 = Finn gets shot down, and we don’t see Rose again until the Falcon.

Version 2A = Finn and Rose each get shot down separately, and Finn drags a badly hurt Rose back to base.

Version 2B = The B version incorporates NeverarGreat’s feedback, attempting to pace out Finn’s reaction and including the door being blasted.