I’m considering revising the beginning. I’ve been feeling lately that it reveals too much of Krypton and Kryptonian culture; perhaps it would be a stronger experience if the reader better shared in Clark’s journey, learning about his heritage as he does.
Post #1237798
- Author
- DuracellEnergizer
- Parent topic
- The Last Son of Krypton (Season One)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1237798/action/topic#1237798
- Date created
- 2-Sep-2018, 6:20 PM