Thanks for the feedback! It looks like option B is what I will go with (although I certainly can provide an alt track as Hal suggested).

I think all that’s on my list for the moment is to try and add a laser blast to when Finn gets “shot down”.

I still like RogueLeader’s idea for having Rose get shot down, but at the same time, I love the original flow of the scene (with Rose and Poe trying to talk Finn out of going). I may play with it. I think some music to create the impact Finn feels when Rose gets shot down may help sell it.