As an aside, would shortening the amount of time Leia is pulling herself to the ship (likely cutting to Poe’s view from the ship window earlier) help with those who do have issues with the scene overall?
How about this?
https://vimeo.com/283286707 (pw: fanedit)
I found a spot to trim the music, which I think is hard to notice, so I was able to trim 1:05 off of the Leia flying shot and cut sooner to Poe. It also works by trimming the beginning of the Leia flying shot instead of the end, so let me know if you’d like to see that.
I have a problem with the scene conceptually more than execution, but I hope this helps!