RogueLeader, that’s an impressive rough cut, and works a lot closer than I thought it would. Great job!

I agree with NeverarGreat about the geography between Finn and Rose. I think there would have to be more time between the Finn shots so it can seem like he ran a long distance.

I also think Finn’s reaction stands out as a little understated. We don’t see his face, and he doesn’t sound quite emotional enough. Still way better than I thought it would be!

NeverarGreat, I understand what you’re saying about trying to finesse the characer’s motives in the scene to make Rose’s actions make more sense. I just have trouble with the idea that crashing into your friend at that speed and angle can ever be seen as “saving” him.

Because I have trouble with Rose’s deliberate collision, the options for me are:

Rose crashes, which may be possible along the lines of what RogueLeager put together.
What I have currently: after yelling “Finn don’t do this”, we don’t see Rose again until the Millenium Falcon. It’s odd, but didn’t bother me when watching the movie in full.