i agree that the last paragraph in the last one is at the very least pretty close to psrfect imo.
some older crawls, from pages 8 ~ 10/11 are really good too. i’m honestly finding it pretty hard to add constructive comments on any of them though.
Post #1222795
- Author
- Collipso
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- Date created
- 4-Jul-2018, 9:03 PM