I really like the new crawl. I do however, still prefer that the original opening line is maintained. You can then have a little more space in the opening paragraph to fit in some information.
Post #1220110
- Author
- darthrush
- Parent topic
- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1220110/action/topic#1220110
- Date created
- 26-Jun-2018, 2:09 AM