Totally understandable. That’s why I think if you can get rid of Han and Maz’s line, it would work well. You could either heavily imply your idea, and at the very least the audience can fill in the blanks themselves.
Post #1218443
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- RogueLeader
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- 20-Jun-2018, 11:59 PM