I think in its current form it makes it seem like Darth Maul is a Jedi Knight. Also be careful with introducing so many concepts, and don’t go too crazy with the all caps words. I think faneditors do that a little too much, personally. If you look at the crawls in the movies, they all caps maybe two or three words at most.
Post #1214574
- Author
- Vladius
- Parent topic
- THE CHOSEN ONE: A STAR WARS STORY (V2 in development) (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1214574/action/topic#1214574
- Date created
- 4-Jun-2018, 8:24 PM