I’m also very much looking forward to it. Out of all the changes listed, the only thing I’d suggest doing differently is to let the “reveal” of Kylo Ren’s parentage occurs when Han meets Leia and says, “Leia, I saw our son.”
It keeps the drama present in the original just in time for it to come into play, holding out mystery up to that point, and makes for a cooler moment of revelation.

Could you post a clip or description of your first Snoke scene? It might be super short if you are removing both the Starkiller planning AND the Solo reveal.