Yep, I agree abot the crawl, I just wanted to be sure.
As for the Hux scene, just a last minute idea about this scene: could a “old school” wipe transition been applied from the FO communication lady to the rebel fleet ? (in order to add more SW signature wipes to the movie) (maybe with a slight slow motion added ?)
(it might be a terrible idea, I’m used to it, don’t mind telling me 😃)
Otherwise, like I said 2 posts ago, Dartrush version works perfectly fine as it is 😉