I’m not able to do better with this idea than Darthrush, so consider his clip my candidate clip as well:
Per the suggestion of many to revisit my removal of Snoke throwing Hux around after the Resistance escapes, here is a new clip which restores one more line of dialogue before we cut back to the Resistance.
I must say that I really like how this flows after getting used to it. I tried including one more shot of Hux at the end but it just didn’t fit.
Excellent take ! Is there a possibility to end the transition to the rebel fleet with a close up on Hux ? (I need to rewatch the original version to see if such shot exists). Anyway, this clips already is perfect.
I’ve added to the sum up list the kicking ladder alteration, according to Hal it might not be feasible but Darthrush has brought another idea, so until the alteration is fully dismissed it’s on the list.
One last thing: Hal, the crawl stays as it is, right ?