I’m not able to do better with this idea than Darthrush, so consider his clip my candidate clip as well:
Per the suggestion of many to revisit my removal of Snoke throwing Hux around after the Resistance escapes, here is a new clip which restores one more line of dialogue before we cut back to the Resistance.
I must say that I really like how this flows after getting used to it. I tried including one more shot of Hux at the end but it just didn’t fit.