Hal 9000 said:

https://vimeo.com/271494997
password: fanedit

Here’s another test with the Luke moment scene, taking feedback into account.

I really am digging this. Beautiful take.

Hal 9000 said:

ziggyonice said:

I just want to bring up one more scene that really bugs me: it’s when Rose’s sister (Paige) starts kicking the ladder to get the damn remote to drop the bombs. It bugs me so much because I’m just screaming at my TV, “JUST CLIMB BACK UP THE FREAKING LADDER!” It’s so long and drawn out, and it just bugs me.

I like this! I’ll try it myself, and will likely go with it. Though, I’ll keep the remote flying past her initially.

I’d really like to see your take on it. That whole sequence seems to be building up tension for no reason at all, and her repeated kicking of the ladder just makes it silly. Shorting that sequence would help significantly. (The remote flying past her I can deal with.)