Welp, I lied! I went ahead and did a mockup of that very idea. This would be about what it would sound like if I did it for real, so please vet it accordingly.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1QaBFQTGmGVioVj2XSztTFHsqeoSJMxhY
Thank you for this. I actually found I had much more of an emotional reaction to this scene using this score, rather than the other. It’s a little softer and more intimate, while the original was rather loud and melodramatic. I actually just showed a friend of mine this version, and her reaction was, “Oh no, I feel so sad for Luke.”
Watching Luke in such a private and mournful moment is something that shouldn’t be exaggerated with a loud score, but rather, it should be quiet, almost as though we there with him. This new music selection feels much more appropriate.
Only issue I have is right at the very beginning when the music starts playing. It sounds like it’s fading in too much. Can you either shorten the time of the fade in or have it start when it hits the next note?