Looks really good!
It’s very cliche to do this in a 3-in-1 edit, but I hope the Qui Gon/Obi Wan vs Darth Maul duel is kept somehow, even if just in flashback.
That’s what I’d like to do.
During the first dream, I’d like to add Maul killing Qui Gon just before Anakin wakes up.