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Post #1204410

Author
Gothamknight
Parent topic
Feedback Wanted: Alternate Mustafar climax for ROTS
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Date created
8-May-2018, 9:31 PM

This concerns the ROTS portion of my Ep1-3 mashup (https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Reedit-Super-Series/id/59213/page/1); here’s chapter 20 of Rise of the Empire. Both duels on Mustafar and Coruscant are present, of course, but severely trimmed. The ending is the most important because I’ve changed the circumstance under which Obi-Wan finally leaves Mustafar.

https://vimeo.com/268402238
(Password: empire)

I’d really love some feedback as to how you think this turned out. My problem with the original version is that I just found it stupid that Obi-Wan leaves Anakin slowly dying on the edge of the lava flow. Why wouldn’t he kill him outright - or perhaps even try to save Anakin since at that point he’d already defeated him?