The “put a cowl” line is also the opposite of a latent sexuality since it clearly denies it. I thought it was a very clever removal.
What better way to include latent sexuality than by ‘clearly’ denying it? 😉
I found that Rey looking elsewhere was enough clue about that, the line is just talkative obviousness. Not a dealbreaker for me anyway if you keep it. Less Canto Bright, no caretakers and less Hux jokes are the 3 things I’m looking for to consider watching a fanedited version, and all are already in your first cut intentions so it’s cool for me. The rest is bonus as long as it doesn’t look/sound fanedited.
I think this edit will be a fairly lightweight one.
Good idea. I estimate that a reduced lengthtime of 15 minutes should be quite enough.