Cutlist seems interesting. I’m under the impression that a few more slight things could be removed/altered (like Finn’s “funny” awakening), but as a whole it could work to have a real version to discuss edits further, so… I’m in for a workprint 😃
It’s possible to remove the second time Finn hits his head on the bubble and you can aso remove him falling over but it might be too jarring to then see him in the next scene with his leaking suit when it was fine before.