password: JEDIT
here is my scene where I have created Luke saving Leia. thoughts?
This is the only idea that makes Carrie Poppins work. I was also planning to have a force vision/communication between Luke and Leia, but you greatly exceeded what I had in mind.
Your edit really adds a lot to Luke. The way you intertwined Luke, Leia and Kylo added emotion and urgency to the scene. When I watched the theatrical version of the movie, the approach to the bridge just felt sloppy and drawn out.