Good job. You show us that Anakin and Palpatine’s relationship is very similar to those of the original prequels, and that there seems to be a spy in the Republic and Darelda is in charge of investigating it.
And as the others say, please at least try to keep the pace until you finish this act, then with act II, will depend that how advanced it is, but please, try not to do more breaks until you finish the updates of this act.
Thanks I look forward to the next update.