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Post #1200333

Author
darthrush
Parent topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
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Date created
25-Apr-2018, 11:59 AM

Hal, for the fathier chase, do you plan on showing them leave the cell and then straight to hyperspace all in the same scene like in my preview? I got a lot of feedback saying that it felt abrupt.

Here is my idea for an solution:

We see Finn and Rose leave the cell. If BB-8 can be put in somehow then that’s a nice addition like you said but not necessary. After they follow him out the cell, you CUT to the Canto Bight police running down the prison halls and looking at the empty sewer/hole.

Now you can either cut right to hyperspace from there or cut to another plot thread and then when we come back to Finn and Rose, they are in hyperspace. I can try throwing together a preview after school today sometime.