Very nice clips. I wonder, if you aren’t using audio sources other than the BluRay itself (and it seems not deleted scenes which use English vocals), perhaps it would be possible to “reconnect media” when you are done to export an English version as well?
I especially like everything about Finn on the Star Destroyer, the entrance and the exit.
I have finished a English Version and a German Version, yet. (English Opening Crawl and Audio) (German Opening Crawl and Audio).