I really enjoy watching your process on this thread, Hal. However, I think the edit “The Fallen Knight” has beaten everyone to the punch with the version of the Hux/Poe sequence. About 3 minutes in, the scene is dramatically trimmed. It’s pretty seamless. You can find that edit elsewhere, I think you’re already aware of it.
“A single light fighter?”
Hux gives the cadet a look.
Poe to BB-8: “Happy beeps here, buddy. Come on. We’ve pulled crazier stunts than this.”
Leia’s first moment
Hux shouts “open fire!” (Hux’s fear and frustration)
“BB-8, punch it!”
“He’s going for the dreadnaught.” “He’s insane.” (Hux’s relief)