Here’s a revised option B with a final “Hello?” at the end. I’m not sure it works better, though. Looking forward to your thoughts about which option B is the best option B.
https://vimeo.com/263147287
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Really liked this - still has the humour, yet without losing too much of it from the original scene - a nice balance.
For me, the added ‘Hello’ gives a bit more to Hux’s personality - his ranting speeches that we’ve seen he likes to go on - without it going too far in detracting from the character.
Quality work 😃