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Post #1192008

Author
Hal 9000
Parent topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (SPOILERS)
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https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1192008/action/topic#1192008
Date created
4-Apr-2018, 8:38 AM
Last modified
4-Apr-2018, 8:40 AM
Edited by
Hal 9000
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Here’s a revised option B with a final “Hello?” at the end. I’m not sure it works better, though. Looking forward to your thoughts about which option B is the best option B.

https://vimeo.com/263147287
password: fanedit