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Post #1191412

Author
Hal 9000
Parent topic
The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
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Date created
2-Apr-2018, 4:54 PM

I see your point, Dom. I’ll retool this when I am able and see if it’d be as seamless to retain a bit more of Poe.

I’d like to remove the analogy of a telephone call if possible, and have it be a somewhat dry thing on Poe’s part. Hux starts rambling, and Poe says a very minimal amount, just to keep Hux rambling.

Idea:
“This is Commander Poe Dameron of the Republic fleet, I have an urgent communique for General Hux.”
“Patch him through. This is Hux of the First Order. Tell your precious princess there will be no terms, cut to cockpit for a moment no surrender.”
“Hux?”
"This is Hux. You and your friends are doomed, we will wipe your filth from the galaxy."
Loading complete “BB8, punch it!”

I appreciate the feedback. I do like this version,