Maybe something along these lines works better:
Poe: "Urgent message"
Hux: "Monologue"
Show engine charging in the x-wing
Poe: "Okay I’ll hold"
Hux: "Can he hear me?"
Officer: "I believe he’s toying with you sir"
Poe: "BB-8 punch it"
Officer: "He’s going for the dreadnaught."
Hux: “He’s insane.”
Slightly keeping the humor but toning it down.