I think the only edit you need to make to shut down any of these criticisms is to make General Hux a little less of a comic buffoon and more of an actual threat.
What.
I can’t say anything about the Last Jedi without you or Dom getting at me.
Post #1190285
- Author
- Handman
- Parent topic
- Star Wars The Last Jedi: The Sacrifice edit
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1190285/action/topic#1190285
- Date created
- 31-Mar-2018, 12:10 AM