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natedeug
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natedeug's The Last Jedi Polished edit V3 (FINAL)
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Date created
29-Mar-2018, 2:13 PM
Last modified
24-Dec-2018, 2:23 PM
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natedeug
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natedeug’s The Last Jedi Polished Edition Version 3 (FINAL)

I found The Last Jedi to be a pleasant surprise. It managed to be its own movie, shucking expectations in favor of actually telling a new story while still maintaining the feeling of the originals. The problems I had with it were minor, and now that we have access to the deleted scenes, I decided to see what my personal perfect cut of the movie would look like.

I used Pilusmagnus’s Extended Edition (available over in the FanEdit.org forums) as a base, which included the following additional deleted scenes:
• Luke mourns Han, and Leia feels his pain through the Force. A shot of Leia from later in the film is used for this.
• Poe gives Finn his jacket back and boasts about saving the entire fleet before being slapped by Leia
• BB8 shows Finn a recording of Rey, prompting him to desert the ship and find her
• Additional shots of the Caretakers being angry at Rey
• New Caretaker village sequence
• New infiltration sequence aboard the Supremacy with Ralph Ineson and Tom Hardy cameos

From these additions, I was able to make the following cuts:

  • Cut the Poe/Hux exchange at the beginning
  • Cut the second doughy eyed porg when Chewie sits down for a meal
  • Reinstated the ‘Luke Has a Moment’ deleted scene (Audio transition tweaked slightly by poppasketti in V2)
  • Cut BB-8 spinning around to get Finn’s attention before showing him the recording of Rey
  • Also cut Finn thanking BB-8 for recording that moment, as a hand can be seen moving BB-8. Scene now ends on Finn’s thoughtful face looking at the transmitter, hard cut to black as he opens the locker and tries to leave.
  • Cut a bit of Maz’s communication, no more gun stroking and fawning over the codebreaker
  • Kept little casino character using BB-8 as a slot machine, but cut the belching. This is necessary because later we hear BB-8 rolling around with change in his innards.
  • Cut BB-8 being tossed out of casino
  • Cut BB-8 using coins as bullets
  • Cut a few shots of the fathier escape, trimming the time we spend with them in the casino and on the streets
  • Cut Rey asking if Ben can put on a cowl or something
  • Cut clothes iron “landing scene”, now cuts from mutiny to deleted infiltration scene
  • Infiltration scene lacks long room with Ralph Ineson following our heroes suspiciously. This removes the unfinished roof effect as well as the man moving BB-8 around. Also cut exchange between Stormtrooper and Finn in the elevator. Now Finn straightens the clothes of DJ and Rose, puts a waste basket on BB-8’s head, and the scene resumes as in the movie, on the long shelf next to the elevators with the black droid spotting them.
  • Holdo says “May the force be with you, always” without the cute back and forth
  • Trimmed the heavy, direct hinting before Snoke’s death, using musical score from TFA (courtesy of OT.com user poppasketti)
  • Cut Rose taking way too long to duck behind cover
  • Cut BB-8 controlled AT-ST running through wreckage
  • Cut Finn saying “Oh, they hate that ship!”
  • Cut second shot of porg yelling in Millennium Falcon when running through Crait’s caves
  • Cut Ben giving order to open fire on speeders and Hux’s overenthusiastic echo
  • Movie ends as in theatrical release. As much as I wanted to end on the Falcon shot and include a mid-credits broom boy, it just doesn’t work out. The ending is too fast.

Two of the above edits (Luke has a moment and the hinting before Snoke’s death) come from Hal 9000 and poppasketti.

My edit is not HD; my little laptop can only handle so much. Instead, this edit suits my needs and is of a fair quality. I’m more interested in getting these ideas out there to the community. Perhaps someone else will pick up on the little things I’ve done.

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TLJ Polished blu-ray jacket

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