While you’re looking at TAS… last night I think I noticed a slight issue (though this was in the V4, so I don’t know if this has changed). Might be a pain since it’s video… but at the beginning of the edit, you cut from the assassination attempt to an establishing shot, then to the senate, then to an establishing shot, then to Palpatine’s office.
This is the first establishing shot
And this is the second
Problem is, the building in that first shot is not the senate building, it’s the building with Palpatine’s office (the senate building is the bigger one in the background of that second shot). So hypothetically all you would have to do here is swap these two shots.