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Post #1186474

Author
thebluefrog
Parent topic
The Lost Jedi (TFA+TLJ edit) (* Part-Finished Project *)
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Date created
22-Mar-2018, 5:27 PM

Good luck on this one!!! Looks good so far.

Consider editing in a shot of the saber falling (maybe from another film?). Also, the silence of Rey following him would work better than the voiceover, the music tells the story fine.