I feel you should keep more of the escape. The only thing would be to remove the weird coin joke with BB8, but at least we can see them escape and then go outside. Here, we don’t get what’s going on, where and how they get the ship, and how did they find BB8. Cutting the chase is a good idea, but keeping some would avoid creating such issues.
Post #1185260
- Author
- MalàStrana
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: The Last Jedi - The Dark Cut (* unfinished project *)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1185260/action/topic#1185260
- Date created
- 20-Mar-2018, 7:40 AM