I like that quite a bit, actually. I think the first two sentences of the second paragraph are a little clunky, but don’t have much by way of suggestions for improvement at the moment.
Post #1177628
- Author
- ChainsawAsh
- Parent topic
- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1177628/action/topic#1177628
- Date created
- 1-Mar-2018, 4:37 PM