The grammar is a little awkward in a few spots too, maybe a slight rewrite would help, other than that, good work!
The grammar is a little awkward in a few spots too, maybe a slight rewrite would help, other than that, good work!
Post #117659
- Author
- Gillean
- Parent topic
- Star Wars DVD Covers
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/117659/action/topic#117659
- Date created
- 23-Jun-2005, 12:15 AM
The grammar is a little awkward in a few spots too, maybe a slight rewrite would help, other than that, good work!