So, as it is currently:

Rebels (lose?) and flee into hyperspace
Emperor Scene
Vader death scene
Rebel Fleet scene
Vader Pyre

The Rebel Fleet scene and the Pyre scene would be separated like the Falcon and Broom Boy final scenes in TLJ, with there being a flash of light or something as a transition to a completely silent funeral (with the Force theme).

I also really don’t want the Empire to lose the war in this movie, but I guess the rebels completely losing would be a bummer. I don’t want the Rebel battle to involve the capital, both for practical rotoscope reasons and for my own reasons. I would be fine with something like this:

I will not film any new live action footage for this edit.

Everything in this edit will depend on how it feels in movement. Everyone’s suggestions will be tested and considered.