Post #1173905

Author: Collipso
Parent topic: Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit) (Cancelled: *unfinished project *)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1173905/action/topic#1173905
Date created: 21-Feb-2018, 4:23 PM

I tried to do this, but didn’t work:

1st paragraph general state of the galaxy: it’s in darkness; post esb; weak regrouping rebellion.

2nd paragraph setup of the plot: assault on Endor;

3rd paragraph setup of initial first few scenes: luke jabba etc,

i ran into the same problem with tying paragraph 2 to 3