I’ll update this as I watch it.
The crawl looks a little off, maybe the font is too small?
The elevator exchange feels better, but I feel like there’s some overlapping music.
I like some of the color correction, but a lot of it completely removes the color black from the frame, making the darkest color a gray. I personally would prefer that the darks be black rather than gray but it isn’t a deal-breaker. Certainly an improvement over the original.
I like Anakin’s “So have you.” It works 10x better than the original, but the laughing sticks out a little. Maybe pitch it down a little.
I like the dreams conversation a lot.
I would cut the Padme packing her bags scene when Anakin sits down and says “I know”. I do really like the way you’ve edited the scene though.
I would cut the librarian asking “are you having a problem Master Kenobi” immediately after asking if he needed assistance.
I would cut the whole Yoda younglings scene, however you’ve made it less unbearable.
I don’t like the landing on Naboo conversation. I never have. I also never liked the Padme’s home deleted scenes.
Padme’s field talk works now. It isn’t completely boring.
The day to night on the nighttime kiss doesn’t work, but it didn’t work in Octorox’s either.
I forget where I first saw it but I loved the little Anakin tusken dream part and him waking up next to Padme.
I don’t like the droid saying “Okie-dokie”
So Owen is straight up Anakin’s brother? That’s interesting. I like the use of Anakin’s theme.
“A thousand more systems” rather than 10 thousand? I guess it’s more realistic.
I liked the cuts to the dinner conversation.
I like the cut to black during the sandpeople slaughter.
What is that shouting when Anakin’s arriving at the homestead?
I like Owen saying “Brother” but I feel like it could be louder.
I really like Padme cutting Anakin off while he’s saying “Strict orders”. That’s genius!
I don’t know why you have Anakin saying see you soon while the ship is flying off, but in any case it is far too quiet to hear.
“Alright let’s do it” sounds nothing like Anakin.
I really don’t like the droid factory sequence but you’ve made it… bearable?
The love pledge is better now.
Obi Wan’s “That was good” should be moved somewhere else.
I really don’t like the 3PO battle droid bits.
I like Obi Wan talking about Anakin at the end. I’m not 100% sure it blends in though.