FWIW the one you just quote from RO (choke on your aspirations) was one of the few in RO that annoyed me.
That’s not the only crappy Vader line in R1. “Its power to create problems has certainly been confirmed” is not as bad, but it’s pertty bad. No one talks like this, and it’s pretty unnatural and forced. These were Vader’s “badass” lines in the OT:
“I find your lack of faith disturbing”
“Don’t act so surprised, Your Highness, you weren’t on a mercy mission this time”
“You have failed me for the last time, Admiral”
“We would be honored if you would join us”
"[…] but I want them alive. No disintegrations"
“I’m here to put you back on schedule”
“I hope so, Commander, for your own sake. The Emperor is not as forgiving as I am”
“Don’t fail me again… Admiral”
“Your powers are weak, old man”
“Apology accepted, Captain Needa”
Except for, maybe, the last case (my least favorite Vader line in the first two movies), none of these lines sounds like Vader trying hard to be a comedian. When Vader chokes the guy in Star Wars, the punchline isn’t that he’s choking the guy. The punchline is that Vader is more powerful and does not allow people to undermine him. When Vader chokes Ozzel, the punchline isn’t that he’s choking the incompetent admiral, the punchline is that Vader has no tolerance for incompetent Imperials.
But the key point here is that almost all these lines have in common one thing: Vader is showing his power and domination over someone (the OT trio, other Imperial officers, etc). He mocks Leia because he knows she’s an enemy and she cannot escape. He mocks Obi-Wan because now Vader is the master. He tells Ozzel his services are no longer needed and warns Piett of making any mistake; he’s not telling him “hahaha I can choke you” (or at least he is telling more than that). He tells Jerjerrod the Emperor is even less patient and forgiving; Vader of course assumes Jerjerrod is aware of his own reputation. By comparison, “its power to create problems has certainly been confirmed” is Vader saying a funny line. It’s aimed at no one, it could be said by Vader or anyone at any moment, regardless of the context. And that kind of setup-punchline moments are way too common in the Disney movies (and the prequels too). [Vader’s “no disintegrations” is almost an exception, because he’s not warning Boba Fett, he’s merely saying he is disappointed by Boba Fett’s actions in an earlier mission, yet I don’t think Vader is trying to be “funny”]
In Star Wars, Leia telling Han that she’s surprised he has survived all this time by following his own rules is not a cheap setup-punchline. It follows several scenes of them bickering over anything, including the trash compactor scenes, and it leads to other scenes of the two having pointless discussions. Leia isn’t stopping the movie, her words are part of the scene.