After months of inactivity on this script, I’ve decided I’m going to retool the whole story. Right now, as the story stands, only the prologue pleases me; the rest is mired is human ugliness, and I’m presently tired of writing that kind of stuff. I want to write more hopeful, humanist* stories.

I may retire this thread and start a new one. I haven’t decided which yet.

*“Humanist” as in “emphasizing the value and agency of human beings”, not “humanist” as in “secular humanist”.