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DuracellEnergizer
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Date created
4-Feb-2018, 9:28 PM

I think you have the beginnings of a good story here. If you’re having trouble fleshing the story out, I suggest you write it as a short film first — just focus on the pertinent plot points. Then, if you feel there’s a bigger narrative still to be tapped into, gradually expand on it by filling in the gaps/adding finer details to what’s there already.