I love this fan edit. The political context is clearer, Anakin is actually likable, his romance with Padmé is actually believable. The dialogue is a thousand times better.
My only problem with it is without the droid factory scene it seems almost as if Anakin and Padmé are purposefully walking to their deaths without a fight, and it seems weird Anakin never pulls out his blue lightsaber in the arena. I preferred L8wrtr’s treatment of the droid factory scene in The Republic Divided.
All in all, this is my go-to edit.