Yeah, that’s definitely how it reads. But it’s just so monotone, always a poor teacher. It would be nice to have one moment of good instruction without him butting in, just to give a bit of contrast to the part.
Post #1165471
- Author
- NeverarGreat
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- The Starlight Project Part 2: The Last Jedi (WIP)
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- Date created
- 30-Jan-2018, 7:06 PM