Hmm not bad, but the problem though is that Luke knows Rey is on board…
And then he rams the ship anyway?
The point in the theatrical is that Holdo just rams the ship not knowing that many Resistance members including Rey are inside.
Eh, I guess he could just sense it. The only big issue that I would find with making the change is that after this happens, you don’t really see much of Luke until the end of Crait and absolutely no one is questioning how the ship rammed through the fleet. You could maybe take Leia’s “Luke…” line and have her say it somehow after it happens. If there is a viable way to do it then I will rebuild all the sfx and rescore the sequence for my own edit but I’m not sure if it plasubile yet within the logic of the story.